October 17, 2008
Hi friends,
I am waiting in the queue to join Lnt Infotech, infact i almost had joined on 25th sept. But i guess destiny had other plans and it wanted me to sit at home and do nothing for more time. Ive heard that when the chips are down and things take a depressing turn, it brings the poet inside us to the fore. So here is my attempt at that. Please be honest with ur feedback and post in your own poetic expressions in the thread.
BARDAASHT KARNE KI HADD HAI
bardaasht karne ki hadd hai
Intezaar karne ki hadd hai
rota tha pehle kum tankhwah ke baarein mein
ab toh jaise naukri hi andhiyaarein mein
mandi ki khabron ne mushkil kar diya hai jeena
kisi aur ki naukri jaati hai toh aata mujhko paseena
yeh mere vishwaas aur sayyam ki sarhad hai
bardasht karne ki hadd hai
intezaar karne ki hadd hai..
bharosa naa thaa pehle buri nazar, ozha aur kale jaadu mein
ab lage aisa ki kisine kismat meri karli hai kaboo mein
mandiron mein roz mattha tekta hun
ghadi ghadi apna mailbox kholkar dekhta hun..
ummeed toh thodi bachchi hai magar aatmavishwas nadarad hai
bardasht karne ki hadd hai
intezaar karne ki hadd hai
subah se ladta hun,dophar se chupta hun aur shaam se haarta hun..
raaton ko computer ki madad se apni neend ko dutkaarta hun
khud par se bharosa utth jaane laga hai
ajeeb sa darr andar sugbugaane laga hai
ab toh bas internet ka sahara aur gharwalon ki madad hai
bardaasht karne ki hadd hai
intezaar karne ki hadd hai
p.s guys please be a little lenient if it is amateurish.
take care
Entry Filed under: Uncategorized. Tags: bardasht, Lnt, poetry.
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Gaurav Pandey | October 17, 2008 at 8:17 pm
It was a nice one Ashwin. I hope the ending paragraph is really as what you mean to say! Life takes turns very often, but definitely you will have an opportunity and you will have to grab that. Try to give romantic poems from next time! ..poets generally write about love and express it to extreme levels….try doing that next time around
Relax. B in touch. Bye and do take care man!
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theasheffect | October 18, 2008 at 9:26 am
thnx for ur comment gaurav…
hmmm romantic poems…ha….m not sure whether i can write that…will try nevertheles…
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aditya singh | October 18, 2008 at 7:48 pm
that was quite a genuine effort man…am very impressed..yup its harsh to you and many people regarding the current scenario,but i hope you arent as depressed as you sounding..by that means i should be finished man..just give it some time…anyways carry on blogging..gud job..you already have a fan in me..cheers
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theasheffect | October 18, 2008 at 11:27 pm
thanx a lot adi…such feedback is eally encouraging
and yaah its a bit extreme…and im not that depressed too…..
this one came out of all what i might have felt or am feeling rite now…happy,sad, depressed, indifferent and a lot of other things….
thnx for ur feedback once again…….take care
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Trupti | December 29, 2008 at 5:49 pm
hi i was really looking for prasoons poem when i came across your blog. Really liked your poem and thanks a lot fot putting up prasoons too.